The book is called The raged boy written by yours truly. It's really a sad story.

A boy name of Kilo Micheal Weed. He was born in Brooklyn on February 17th, 1987. He had a wonderful life. Great Friends,great family,great life. But at 5 years old, his mom enrolled in the US army and made Kilo somber for weeks for her return. During the time, his father, Rictor, abuse him into a living hell. He made him eat rats for breakfast, leftover cereal for lunch and no dinner. He made him do every chore in the house and force him out of school. One day, 2 generals of the army informed that his mother, Chella, was killed in the war. It was depression for Kilo to hear but Rictor furious. He force his son out of the house and force to live on his own. 6 months was hell for him to live on his own. But two loving couple, Jennifer and Bob Shella, took him in and adopted him as his foster parents. Now the boy is 30 and have a wife and 3 beautiful kids. Then one sunday morning, he heard that his dad was flithy rich and his mother was never dead, but left Rictor and make the war a cover up. Kilo was enraged. He decide to grab his 28 caliber and told his wife he was going to "visit" an old friend. But he was really going to kill his parents.Before encountering them both together. He had a chose, killed his father, mother, neither, or both. Found out in the Enraged boy.

What do you think?

That's an interesting plot. I'd love to read it.

What would you consider the genre? It seems like it could fall under mystery.

No replies, don't make empire sad, YOU DON'T LIKE IT WHEN EMPIRE GETS SAD!!!!

I like it.

Seriously that plot is friggin AMAZING!

I haven't heard of anything like that. That's the type of book that gets a movie deal. I'd say the Genre is Action, not to much mystery involved except maybe earlier with the whole covered up death.

Maybe Action/Suspense.

I got 25% of the prologue done, here it is so far



Enraged Boy
By Empirewild


Prologue

On Feburary 16th, 1987, Dr. sage told two parent they had a little boy, a little boy named Kilo Micheal Weed, who was born in Brooklyn, New york. His Parents, Chella and Rictor, cried when they saw a new face in the family. Rictor cried though out the day saying in his mind. "My own son......He is so beautiful, I can't believe I'm already a dad, I never felt this way before in my life." Rictor was never loved in family and wanted to make sure he was a better dad then his father, even though Rictor's father was never there. They bought him home that morning, when Kilo started to cry the first time, they knew that for the rest of there lives where ahead of them.
Kilo grew up in a 3 bedroom house fill with life. His dad played the piano to make the house full of music, Rictor never liked the house to be too banal. His mom always told Kilo when he was 2 about her dad, Strider, in the US army about how his life change and how he meet his wife and other remedying stories. Kilo didn't understand, but he always had the innocent smile on his face, always saying, "Mommy, where is grandpa?" She always responded. "Honey, he is in a peaceful place." Kilo always thought that the peaceful place must of been full of candy. But really, Strider died in the war.
When Kilo was 3 years old, he always wanted to play with Rictor. Rictor was very busy business man who worked in the World Trade Center. He was an Vice-CEO there, making sure everything is intact. Sometime Rictor brings Kilo to there and Kilo always love to be in there. Rictor didn't know why he loved it, but Kilo loved it of how big it is. Kilo went to Madison Daycare, when both of his parent where out of town. There, he met his first best friend named Nick, he also met his brother, Jake. KIlo was always a trouble maker in Daycare with Nick and Jake. They threw balls at kids, spill juices, and other mayhem. He even learn his first swear word, fuck. When he got home that day, he told his dad, "Daddy, what is fuck?" Rictor fell on his back and was shocked of what he said. "Son, where did you hear that from?" Rictor calmly said. "From my bestest friend, Nick." Kilo respond. "Luis's son? God dammit, I knew his kids are trouble makers." Rictor angerly said. Luis was Nick and Jake's dad and Rictor's boss. Rictor hated him so badly, but Luis didn't care, he was just getting paid and that all that matters.

As far as concept and story goes, well done. Your grammar and spelling are off, however. I wouldn't normally address this, but if you plan to make it into a book, you need to fix all that or your editor will think you write atrociously.

Strider was an epic war hero indeed.

It's a rough draft now, it's not the final one yet. The book won't be release until late April of 2011

You expect to be finished the entire book by April? That's pretty good. I'm just bringing it up so your editor has to spend a lot of time fixing grammar and spelling.

I mean I'm not going to fuck up on purpose and let him/her do like 95% of spelling errors, I'm trying to aim less then 10% of spelling and grammar errors so my editor don't have to do so much shit.

Well. I lost all my data from my book and decide to fuck it and remake the story ALL OVER. The characters and story (Well most of it) will remain the same and other shit will be remade into a better story, so my april 2011 goal is now canceled and it will be release when I give a fuck to release it so the drafts above are LIES!!!

Is Strider still going to be a kick ass war hero?

Yep.

Sick.