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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   January 1st 2014, 9:01 pm

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And I was just asking you about this.  Gootecks 

Interesting chapter. Now we know more about these Soul Warriors. I saw that bit of possible foreshadowing... As soon as I read that scene with Mara testing out her fire, I said "Oh no, don't tell me THAT is going to happen".
What do you mean by "THAT"?

Oh you know, that.  sneaky 

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   January 19th 2014, 1:57 pm

New York, huh? I wonder if it's the sticky bandits that plan to attack the UN.

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PostSubject: Re: dragon soul discussion    January 19th 2014, 10:30 pm

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New York, huh? I wonder if it's the sticky bandits that plan to attack the UN.
Sure and Mara/Ramsey will be rescued by Kevin.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   June 10th 2014, 12:46 am

Hello everyone! I am sorry for not posting any chapters for awhile, but life kept getting in the way. Today marks the two year anniversary of my Dragon Soul fic. In celebration of this event, I have released the next two chapters. I hope you enjoy them, and here's to the hope that I can return to writing on a daily basis.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   June 10th 2014, 3:34 am

Good chapters.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   June 10th 2014, 7:56 am

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Good chapters.

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Thanks for the thoughts, and I fixed those spelling errors.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   June 10th 2014, 12:27 pm

Also, it looks like your first opening got taken down by YouTube or the uploader.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   September 22nd 2014, 5:41 pm



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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   September 22nd 2014, 5:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   September 22nd 2014, 6:04 pm

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It's an old joke.



The person who did the subs didn't translate keikaku, like it's some important word that shouldn't be translated like names or some attacks. Really, it just means plan. First sign of a shitty sub, when they don't translate a lot of words for no reason other than for being a weeaboo.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   December 14th 2014, 8:31 pm

Happy Holidays everyone! I apologize for not posting a lot of chapters this year. Life has been getting in the way of me writing which is why 2014 has been my least productive year yet. To make up for it I have posted chapter 50 today, and will have a double chapter release out for Christmas. Finally, I have a special project that I have been working on that will be released soon. Hope you enjoy this chapter, and hope you all are having a wonderful holiday season.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   December 14th 2014, 8:44 pm

It looks like it's that time of the month for our heroine.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   December 15th 2014, 12:50 am

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It looks like it's that time of the month for our heroine.
Yeah maybe, but with the life she has had everyday is that time of the month.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   December 15th 2014, 10:26 am

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It looks like it's that time of the month for our heroine.
Yeah maybe, but with the life she has had everyday is that time of the month.

Yeah. I wouldn't let her do my taxes; that's for sure.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   December 15th 2014, 11:27 am

On a serious note, this was a decent to good chapter. The progression was good and it looks like you understand when and how to use drama. It looks like Mara being on her own without Ramsay's help will help develop her character a bit. At least that's what I'm hoping for.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   December 24th 2014, 3:38 pm

Merry Christmas everyone! As promised a Christmas double chapter release. I hope you enjoy these two chapters. It has been a great year, and I all hope you will enjoy what is to come. I will be starting off the new year by releasing my special project on the first of the year. Hope you have a wonderful holiday and a happy new year.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   December 24th 2014, 3:54 pm

Both chapters were pretty good.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   January 1st 2015, 9:33 pm

Happy New Year! I hope that you will all enjoy the first ever Dragon Soul movie!
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   January 1st 2015, 10:41 pm

Hmm...let's see.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   January 1st 2015, 11:49 pm

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Hmm...let's see.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   January 2nd 2015, 12:28 am

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Hmm...let's see.

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Thanks for your thoughts
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   January 25th 2015, 5:46 pm

Good setup. Kept me interested through the chapter and interested for more. Just one missing word noticed:

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I started at the beginning of the paragraph to make it easier to find.

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I also have another observation that I'll let you know about later, because I can better articulate it via speaking.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   February 2nd 2015, 12:34 am

Well, I don't have too much to say here. It was interesting and it's time for the main event with the major fights.

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   February 8th 2015, 9:43 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dragon Soul Discussion   February 15th 2015, 5:37 pm

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