Thoughts on another fanfic

I usually go for fire or electricity, but I think I'll break the trend. How about telepathy, or, or how about telekinesis? That'd be different for my character.

Also if you don't want to use Justin I've just been called Jay before. Either way's good.

justinlynch3 wrote:

I usually go for fire or electricity, but I think I'll break the trend. How about telepathy, or, or how about telekinesis? That'd be different for my character.

Also if you don't want to use Justin I've just been called Jay before. Either way's good.

I'll use Justin and I think telekinesis goes perfectly.

carnagevegeta wrote:

justinlynch3 wrote:

I usually go for fire or electricity, but I think I'll break the trend. How about telepathy, or, or how about telekinesis? That'd be different for my character.

Also if you don't want to use Justin I've just been called Jay before. Either way's good.

I'll use Justin and I think telekinesis goes perfectly.

Cool. I mentioned to Chulance to drop by, no idea if he will or not though.

I think that as far as the events are concerned, if something involves a dilemmatic choice, you should be sure to PM the person, just so we don't have the people feel like they're being too OOC.

Prince Doebler wrote:

I think that as far as the events are concerned, if something involves a dilemmatic choice, you should be sure to PM the person, just so we don't have the people feel like they're being too OOC.

yep also if their is an event that you wish to be different in the story please let me know.

You can just change my name to Ryo or Ryoh. Gravity powers would be cool, since I'm a villain and need to have a strong power. The basic things that Gravity really helps with is this for reference.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shinra_Tensei
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Bansh%C5%8D_Ten%27in

Obviously they don't have to be followed exactly, but just like a reference.

Ryu wrote:

You can just change my name to Ryo or Ryoh. Gravity powers would be cool, since I'm a villain and need to have a strong power. The basic things that Gravity really helps with is this for reference.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shinra_Tensei
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Bansh%C5%8D_Ten%27in

Obviously they don't have to be followed exactly, but just like a reference.

kl and gravity powers goes wonderful with the character. This is my funnest power to work with so far.

The only thing I'd change is that I tend to lean on the side of vigilante. I don't do evil, personally.

Prince Doebler wrote:

The only thing I'd change is that I tend to lean on the side of vigilante. I don't do evil, personally.

kl to be honest I had you leaning toward the evil side in the beginning and eventually as the fic goes on I was going to swing you toward the good side.

Looking at my character personality I can see him in the future taking a villain turn. Making choices he knows is technically right, but conflicts with Strider cause of the extreme lengths it'd take Justin.

Say if somewhere along the lines he agrees to a mass murder or something to achieve a greater good of some type in the end. But Strider would be against the killing and wanting to find another way. Not saying it has to be that, but just for examples sake. You know, basically do something bad for the greater good.

Going to post this here and say that you can choose how your character looks. You can pick his outfit, choose anything you want. I feel it's better for you guys to decide instead of me coming up with an outfit for each person

I suppose just use this as a general appearance (minus claws).
https://2img.net/h/i444.photobucket.com/albums/qq165/BellaDonna_Hardy/Stories/Love%20Interests/hugh-jackman-wolverine-full-fury-08.jpg

Hey guys don't know what theme music to use for the fic. So you guys can hep decide. Here were my thoughts on what it should be.

#2 or 4 out of that list gets my vote. Would you be open to any song recommendations to help find a theme?

justinlynch3 wrote:

#2 or 4 out of that list gets my vote. Would you be open to any song recommendations to help find a theme?

yes

carnagevegeta wrote:

justinlynch3 wrote:

#2 or 4 out of that list gets my vote. Would you be open to any song recommendations to help find a theme?

yes

Alright. I'll have a look around my playlists, see what I have to offer. May take a little while, and I'll get back to you with a list.

The Soul Reaper Captain outfit from Bleach will do for outfit.



Light skinned, about 5'10, 178lbs, short blackish blue hair and a samurai straw hat design that he makes from ice whenever he travels. Brown eyes.

For Lloyd.

5'9"
180 lbs.
Brown hair, flat and parted at the side
Mustache+Goatee
Blue eyes
Dark Grey trenchcoat
Black shirt
Deep Blue pants
Dark Brown boots

Weapons of choice
Great Sword (can wield it one-handed)
Two .50 cal Desert Eagles

Yeah, it's a reference to Dante from Devil May Cry

Strider Zero wrote:

The Soul Reaper Captain outfit from Bleach will do for outfit.



Light skinned, about 5'10, 178lbs, short blackish blue hair and a samurai straw hat design that he makes from ice whenever he travels. Brown eyes.

kl only thing I would say is have him with blue eyes and instead of black and white make it blue and white, but up to you

carnagevegeta wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

The Soul Reaper Captain outfit from Bleach will do for outfit.



Light skinned, about 5'10, 178lbs, short blackish blue hair and a samurai straw hat design that he makes from ice whenever he travels. Brown eyes.

kl only thing I would say is have him with blue eyes and instead of black and white make it blue and white, but up to you

You can make his eyes turn icey blue when he uses his powers, and when he gets really into his powers (i.e taps into most of his power) his hair can turn the same color. How about that?

Strider Zero wrote:

carnagevegeta wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

The Soul Reaper Captain outfit from Bleach will do for outfit.



Light skinned, about 5'10, 178lbs, short blackish blue hair and a samurai straw hat design that he makes from ice whenever he travels. Brown eyes.

kl only thing I would say is have him with blue eyes and instead of black and white make it blue and white, but up to you

You can make his eyes turn icey blue when he uses his powers, and when he gets really into his powers (i.e taps into most of his power) his hair can turn the same color. How about that?

kl would you want the suit to turn white and blue to?

No the outfit should stay as is. Only the eyes and hair. Will there be a logia type of thing where some will be able to turn their bodies into full element and stuff?

Not sure on this one, it's hard to know exactly what to look for when I don't know the story. But hey, may as well start somewhere. Might get lucky and find a fit. XD

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FO0JddOJZUM

Also forgive me if any are low quality, hard to tell on some through laptop speakers.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Wg_lpMzUHU&list=PL6D50E87FF272BDB7&index=12&feature=plpp_video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RRkIQ1Djlbs&feature=related

Honestly now that I look at it I might not have much to offer. Not that I don't have music, but most is looking like stuff you'd use for a character theme, instead of a general theme.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iiNmS-ix43M&list=PL6D50E87FF272BDB7&index=83&feature=plpp_video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rlcBVVdxByY&list=PL1E36EC09F360A75C&index=1&feature=plpp_video

Well I guess that's it for now. If you want to dig up character themes I might be able to better help, but as general theme, this is as much as I found.

Strider Zero wrote:

No the outfit should stay as is. Only the eyes and hair. Will there be a logia type of thing where some will be able to turn their bodies into full element and stuff?

maybe I'm not sure yet though.

justinlynch3 wrote:

Not sure on this one, it's hard to know exactly what to look for when I don't know the story. But hey, may as well start somewhere. Might get lucky and find a fit. XD

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FO0JddOJZUM

Also forgive me if any are low quality, hard to tell on some through laptop speakers.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Wg_lpMzUHU&list=PL6D50E87FF272BDB7&index=12&feature=plpp_video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RRkIQ1Djlbs&feature=related

Honestly now that I look at it I might not have much to offer. Not that I don't have music, but most is looking like stuff you'd use for a character theme, instead of a general theme.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iiNmS-ix43M&list=PL6D50E87FF272BDB7&index=83&feature=plpp_video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rlcBVVdxByY&list=PL1E36EC09F360A75C&index=1&feature=plpp_video

Well I guess that's it for now. If you want to dig up character themes I might be able to better help, but as general theme, this is as much as I found.

I think character themes would go great as well