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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   November 21st 2011, 4:52 pm

I have some motivation so I might get another chapter out sometime soon.

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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   November 24th 2011, 2:07 am

Nice chapter. Dialogue between Shin and Endull is priceless.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   December 22nd 2011, 1:07 am

That was pretty good. Well written on the sad parts.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   February 18th 2013, 8:29 pm

Sorry, guys, for no chapters in 2012. I'm a bit ashamed of myself, but finally got a new one.

Along with the new chapter, I eliminated chapter titles. It's just too tedious to think of them and I'm early enough in the fic that I can do it without it being a drastic change.

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PostSubject: RE: Dectective Shin discussion   April 29th 2013, 9:26 am

Great fic man! I can't wait to see what happens next, but the two links in chapter 10 are no good. The vidoes aren't on youtube anymore. Other than that I really like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   April 29th 2013, 11:23 am

Oh shit. I'll fix it soon. Thanks man.

Edit: Fixed the links. I suggest re-reading that part because the music makes it a lot better.

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PostSubject: RE: Dectective Shin discussion   April 29th 2013, 4:54 pm

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Oh shit. I'll fix it soon. Thanks man.

Edit: Fixed the links. I suggest re-reading that part because the music makes it a lot better.
Those songs take those scenes from a 5 to a 1000. You are a amazing. I just wish that was as good as you at picking songs for scenes in my fic.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   May 31st 2013, 9:17 pm

Great chapter dude! Keep up the good work.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   July 26th 2013, 11:15 pm

Along with the new chapter, I added the static ending theme at the end of Chapter 2.

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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   December 11th 2014, 5:30 pm

Nice to see that you are still working on this one. Can't wait to see what's next.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   March 5th 2015, 12:54 am

A very good chapter. It had a good balance and decent flow. The story is still in it's earlier stages, but the layers are already forming.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   April 29th 2015, 10:55 am

Another good chapter. Shin is funny as always and references are killer. The hero name is a little weird thought. How did you come up with it?
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   April 29th 2015, 11:20 am

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Another good chapter.  Shin is funny as always and references are killer.  The hero name is a little weird thought.  How did you come up with it?

That's a secret.

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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   April 30th 2015, 11:10 am

Great chapter man! Very deep and emotional. I can't wait to see how he handles it.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   April 30th 2015, 1:29 pm

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Great chapter man!  Very deep and emotional.  I can't wait to see how he handles it.

Thanks. More coming soon.

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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   May 10th 2015, 8:35 pm

Good chapter as always! I like the turn around for Shin. I don't know how long his journey will be, but I do know that something like this is too small to keep him down for long.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin discussion   December 29th 2015, 3:08 pm

That was some brutal shit! Can't wait for more!
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