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PostSubject: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 14th 2009, 10:09 pm

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Concept: Yu Yu Hakusho

Story:
40 years have now come after Yu Yu Hakusho ended. A new Spirit Detective has been picked and it's Shin Yakamoru. He will go through Spirit Detective hardships just like the other 3 previous Detectives.

Guidelines:

No relatives to anyone major from YYH please. If you want a relative of a minor char in YYH (makes only a few appearances and has little importance), that is fine.



Name:
Age:
Gender:
Allignment: (Good, bad, neutral. Main team spots are filled.)
Race: (Human or Apparition)
Weapon(s): (if any)
Personality:
Appearance:

Abilities: (Any desired transformations can be placed here as well as other abilities like Dragon of the Darkness flame or whatever)


Any more info just ask.
Bio: (Give a brief summary of your character's life)


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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 15th 2009, 8:54 pm

Ah. I don't know too much about Yu Yu Hakusho, so I dunno if I can sign up.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 15th 2009, 10:06 pm

I know nothing of this series... will there ever be new dragon blast chapters? Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 15th 2009, 10:26 pm

Yes. Of course. I'm taking temp break again.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 15th 2009, 11:13 pm

I, too, no nothing of YYH. I'm willing to try, but I'll probably end up with something out of place unless I get some source material to work with. Abilities, for example.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 15th 2009, 11:14 pm

Ah.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 1:58 am

You already got my character.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 4:00 am

I dunno if this will fit the universe, but here goes...

Name: Kimarous
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Allignment: Good
Race: Apparition
Weapon(s): N/A
Personality: Perpetually concerned about Raisin and very protective of her. This causes him to appear a bit sombre and withdrawn to the average onlooker, but is actually very talkative if people actually start conversing with him. Despite everything, he actually has a strong sense of humour and likes to make quips and puns when the opportunity arises.
Appearance: Has dark brown hair (caesar cut) and purple eyes; his physique is slightly muscular. His arms are missing while his hands remain; the gaps at the wrist and shoulder are tipped with blue flame. Wears black pants and shoes; does not wear a shirt.
Abilities: Kimarous's hands can freely hover around, currently able to extend as far as twenty feet from his body (range increases by one foot each year). He can instantly warp these hands back to "a limb's length" of his body, as well as warp his own body "a limb's length" to his right hand (but not his left, due to Raisin). If his hands are forced any farther, his own body will have to move. These hands have the equivalent power of an average martial artist when striking blows. They can also "lock" themselves at "a limb's length" if Kimarous needs to influence his own body, like lift himself up from falling over.

Name: Raisin
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Allignment: Good
Race: Apparition
Weapon(s): N/A
Personality: Very gentle and polite, almost softspoken, in basic social interaction. Despite this, she is very brave and strong of will; if she needs to fight or stand up for herself, this side of her really shows. Not against killing in the appropriate circumstances (like self defense). Extremely supportive of Kimarous and encourages him constantly. Secretly finds her predicament mildly kinky.
Appearance: Has dark purple hair (bobcut) and blue eyes; has a small physique and a relatively small (but not exactly flat) bust. Wears a dress resembling a merged priestess-style shirt (long, baggy sleeves) and a miniskirt, maroon in colour; does not wear shoes.
Abilities: Raisin has the ability to transform between Kimarous's hand and her original body. Kimarous holds no real direct sway over Raisin in her Base Form, although he can "recall" her like his hands; in doing so, she reverts to Hand Form. In Base Form, Raisin is a surprisingly strong and powerful fighter, able to punch right through ordinary people with little effort. In Hand Form, Raisin can allow Kimarous to take control or even "take the reigns" herself if she desires; because of her status, she actually holds greater sway over it and, if needed, can outright ignore Kimarous's intentions.

Bio: Given my lack of knowledge about the YYH setting, this'll be really half-assed; try to fill in the blanks as best you can. Basically, Kimarous and Raisin were lovers and, due to some circumstances I'll let you explain, Raisin has more or less become Kimarous's left hand. The two are currently trying to find a way to (safely) return Raisin to normal or die together in the attempt.

Notes:
- The "warping" effect looks like a burst of blue flame, similar to Kimarous's wrists and elbows.
- While Kimarous primarily fights using his detached hands / Raisin, he is also proficient with kick attacks in emergencies.
- Although "love" is a strong part of their relationship, their core theme is more about "support". This is especially symbolic with their arms (and I'll leave you to see what I mean).
- Because Raisin is Kimarous's left hand, the two share a physical bond of sorts; if Raisin is injured any way, in either form, Kimarous feels it as well. If she died, Kimarous (physically speaking) just loses a hand; if Kimarous himself died, both would die.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 9:15 pm

I like it, Kimarous. I'll do some tweaking to see what we can do. Since you added the blue flames thing, I can make them Fire Apparitions.

Also, you don't mind any jacking off with raisin jokes in the fic, do you?
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 9:29 pm

Razz You kidding? Just think of the possibilities; why do you think Raisin finds it kinky?

Not to mention other, more mindless actitivies; picking his nose, cleaning his ear, scratching his butt...

Granted, the CHARACTERS probably wouldn't be happy! Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 9:31 pm

Good. Because I like to torture some characters.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 9:32 pm

Although I wonder... why would he jack off when she can transform for outright fucking? scratch
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 9:33 pm

I thought you said love, not lust. Christian principle there Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 9:37 pm

Well, I'm not fully sure how the YYH universe is... wouldn't people associated with a Spirit Detective get a good idea of how the afterlife works; i.e. is Christianity the true religion? Furthermore, I'm assuming Apparitions come from somewhere other than Earth; wouldn't they have their own religions / know what really is?
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 9:39 pm

Kimarous wrote:
Well, I'm not fully sure how the YYH universe is... wouldn't people associated with a Spirit Detective get a good idea of how the afterlife works; i.e. is Christianity the true religion? Furthermore, I'm assuming Apparitions come from somewhere other than Earth; wouldn't they have their own religions / know what really is?

Yeah, I was kidding.


Dead people to go Spirit World, Demons live in Demon World, Earth is for humans.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 10:44 pm

Name: Bunninator
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 10:51 pm

Toguro wrote:
Kimarous wrote:
Well, I'm not fully sure how the YYH universe is... wouldn't people associated with a Spirit Detective get a good idea of how the afterlife works; i.e. is Christianity the true religion? Furthermore, I'm assuming Apparitions come from somewhere other than Earth; wouldn't they have their own religions / know what really is?
Yeah, I was kidding.

Dead people to go Spirit World, Demons live in Demon World, Earth is for humans.
I figured as much.

On a side note, don't you think the relationship between Kimarous and Raisin kinda shatters the rules a bit? I mean, how do you go about telling a minister that you want to marry your the woman in your hand?

I'm under the impression they (Kima and Raisin) probably came to some sort of understanding that they were technically married. After all, there's a strong possibility they'd have to spend the rest of their lives that way. If they ever do seperate, they could have a more official ceremony.
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PostSubject: Re: Detective Shin sign ups   Detective Shin sign ups EmptySeptember 16th 2009, 11:13 pm

Kimarous wrote:
Toguro wrote:
Kimarous wrote:
Well, I'm not fully sure how the YYH universe is... wouldn't people associated with a Spirit Detective get a good idea of how the afterlife works; i.e. is Christianity the true religion? Furthermore, I'm assuming Apparitions come from somewhere other than Earth; wouldn't they have their own religions / know what really is?
Yeah, I was kidding.

Dead people to go Spirit World, Demons live in Demon World, Earth is for humans.
I figured as much.

On a side note, don't you think the relationship between Kimarous and Raisin kinda shatters the rules a bit? I mean, how do you go about telling a minister that you want to marry your the woman in your hand?

I'm under the impression they (Kima and Raisin) probably came to some sort of understanding that they were technically married. After all, there's a strong possibility they'd have to spend the rest of their lives that way. If they ever do seperate, they could have a more official ceremony.

That works Wink
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