CV Fan Fic Discussion

Ryu wrote:

I figured. Btw, I in Z, if Gohan had turned SSJ right there, he wouldn't have been able to defeat even third form Freeza. Gohan was around or close to 30,000 at the time and had he turned SSJ, he'd have 1,500,000 which is just a little more than Freeza's second form.

Of course, this is your fic so your PLs are different.

yea the power levels are very diffrent in mine and later on in the fanfic you will be able to see how diffrent it is

I always wanted Cooler in the main series.

Ryu wrote:

I always wanted Cooler in the main series.

yeah me to

DBK has nothing on DBKT in speed.

Strider Zero wrote:

DBK has nothing on DBKT in speed.

I have to say that I'm not caught up in K Squad but I think you should read a few fanfics here to get some of the gist of a decent to good speed at which a fic should probably move.

I strongly suggest Fighters Abroad and/or Mystic Orbs.

Strider Zero wrote:

I have to say that I'm not caught up in K Squad but I think you should read a few fanfics here to get some of the gist of a decent to good speed at which a fic should probably move.

I strongly suggest Fighters Abroad and/or Mystic Orbs.

this was not a deep chapter as it would appear to be
even though idk if you found it to slow or to fast

Like I said, I'm not caught up. I was actually referring to KT.

Strider Zero wrote:

Like I said, I'm not caught up. I was actually referring to KT.

oh lol i wanted to go with a faster pace instead of the slower pace that started off KT and i wanted cooler to come right after frieza so the pace stays fast

Thus the hero saves the day again. I'm curious though, when did Cooler learn Gohan's name and vice versa?

Ryu wrote:

Thus the hero saves the day again. I'm curious though, when did Cooler learn Gohan's name and vice versa?

lol i kinda skipped the intos because the characters are already used but yea

So much for slug.

Hey all, I honestly don't know if I should continue this, especially since I have some new great material. If I had to rate this fan fic I would give it a 5 or 6 out of 10. Was a little rushed and not my best work. If I fail miserably as a comic writer or if we start going through with the idea I pitched yesterday then I will post some of my new material. Until then I' am wondering should I continue this or not, also what was your opinion on this series

It was alright, but the pacing was crazy fast.

Strider Zero wrote:

It was alright, but the pacing was crazy fast.

thanks but should I continue this

carnagevegeta wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

It was alright, but the pacing was crazy fast.

thanks but should I continue this

I dunno. If you feel like continuing it, then do so.

New issue of Damarius up tomorrow. In the meantime I would appreciate some reviews here if you guys can.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3058277/1/Damarius-The-Vampire

lol Damarius is like my little brother, he hates losing.

So looks like Adelina wants to care about Damarius after all.

I say he pulls though, he's the lead character. XD

justinlynch3 wrote:

So looks like Adelina wants to care about Damarius after all.

I say he pulls though, he's the lead character. XD

Yep he is growing on her and this scene has a little bit to do with her origins .

fyi Damarius face planting while attempting his first jump was hilarious. XD

justinlynch3 wrote:

fyi Damarius face planting while attempting his first jump was hilarious. XD

Thanks XD

Hey guys I'll be releasing another new fic tomorrow. Also I will have a preview of the fic where I use your characters sometime this week.

A piece of advice: Don't get caught up with too many fanfictions. You definitely don't want to spread yourself out too thin.

Strider Zero wrote:

A piece of advice: Don't get caught up with too many fanfictions. You definitely don't want to spread yourself out too thin.

This is the last one before I start the other one