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Howaito Yokubo
Third of the Ring
Number of posts : 155
Age : 25
Name : Starts with a P, but call me Lust~
Quote : Fuck this, I'm going back to bed! ~Me irl every morning
Registration date : 2011-07-11
| | Subject: A Second Cat? Discussion Topic July 12th 2011, 7:05 pm | |
| Okay, I have four chapters up so far. How are you liking it so far..? ^_\\\ | |
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Strider Zero
Administrator
 Number of posts : 9232
Location : McNeil Village
Quote : The closer you get to something, the tougher it is to see it.
Registration date : 2008-08-30
| | Subject: Re: A Second Cat? Discussion Topic July 12th 2011, 7:36 pm | |
| Haven't read anything yet but I'll take a look sometime soon. | |
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Howaito Yokubo
Third of the Ring
Number of posts : 155
Age : 25
Name : Starts with a P, but call me Lust~
Quote : Fuck this, I'm going back to bed! ~Me irl every morning
Registration date : 2011-07-11
| | Subject: Re: A Second Cat? Discussion Topic July 12th 2011, 7:50 pm | |
| Yay! I seriously almost typed "uau" because of how much this keyboard is faded... >.> | |
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Ponky Poo
Second of the Ring
Number of posts : 533
Registration date : 2008-10-21
| | Subject: Re: A Second Cat? Discussion Topic July 12th 2011, 9:37 pm | |
| Is knowing anything more than "Fruits Basket is a shojou manga with people that have something to do with animals" nescessary for reading this? | |
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Howaito Yokubo
Third of the Ring
Number of posts : 155
Age : 25
Name : Starts with a P, but call me Lust~
Quote : Fuck this, I'm going back to bed! ~Me irl every morning
Registration date : 2011-07-11
| | Subject: Re: A Second Cat? Discussion Topic July 12th 2011, 9:41 pm | |
| Yeah, kinda. You need to know who is what character and the names and what they look like and stuff. The story was pretty much meant for people who frikken love Kyo, but I see that no girls r active really... | |
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Strider Zero
Administrator
Number of posts : 9232
Location : McNeil Village
Quote : The closer you get to something, the tougher it is to see it.
Registration date : 2008-08-30
| | Subject: Re: A Second Cat? Discussion Topic July 12th 2011, 9:54 pm | |
| There are two others. They might enjoy it. | |
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Howaito Yokubo
Third of the Ring
Number of posts : 155
Age : 25
Name : Starts with a P, but call me Lust~
Quote : Fuck this, I'm going back to bed! ~Me irl every morning
Registration date : 2011-07-11
| | Subject: Re: A Second Cat? Discussion Topic July 12th 2011, 10:01 pm | |
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Ryu
Retired Staff
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Age : 33
Quote : This one is for me, Bison! HADOUKEN!
Registration date : 2008-08-30
| | Subject: Re: A Second Cat? Discussion Topic July 13th 2011, 8:26 pm | |
| It's certainly not bad. I think your chapters are far better suited for script style as the bulk of it is dialogue. And then if more things happened in those chapters. Just friendly suggestions. | |
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