MO discussion.

First few chapters up.

Cloyd is a cool name. Who created that character?

He is mine.

I just read the first chapter Justin. This is quite good.

Thanks.

I read the first 2. It's pretty good so far. I'll read on later and get up to date.

Cool

I'll start reading since I'll be in it!

More chapters coming tomorrow, gotta get you guys caught up.

This story is up to date.

I'm gonna start reading mO soon

Asses are now getting kicked.

justinlynch3 wrote:

Asses are now getting kicked.

This is the truth.

Fights has been laid out.

How the hell do you get chapters out so fast and so consistently? You should seriously consider getting a degree in creative writing and become a script writer.

Yamcha wrote:

How the hell do you get chapters out so fast and so consistently? You should seriously consider getting a degree in creative writing and become a script writer.

Wow, now that's a complainant. Thanks.

As for how I do it, what can I say, I tend not to over stress myself thinking about every detail. I go with the flow, doing whatever comes to mind as long as I can fit it into the story. Plus, having a lot of free time on your hands tends to help out as well.

justinlynch3 wrote:

Yamcha wrote:

How the hell do you get chapters out so fast and so consistently? You should seriously consider getting a degree in creative writing and become a script writer.

Wow, now that's a complainant. Thanks.

As for how I do it, what can I say, I tend not to over stress myself thinking about every detail. I go with the flow, doing whatever comes to mind as long as I can fit it into the story. Plus, having a lot of free time on your hands tends to help out as well.

I see. But yeah, you should be a script writer.

Thanks.

Well, on another note, do you read the story? Comment on what you think.

TBH, I haven't gotten to it yet, but the first couple of chapters are good so I'll read it eventually.

Cool.

Hope you'll enjoy.

Well I power read through and I'm at Chapter 34 now. I will read more tomorrow. I should be caught up in no time.

As for how it is, the story is very well written, it's good in description so it's pretty clear what's going on, the characters are cool (Favorite is Jet and Cloyd so far.)

That said, the only recurring problem that arises is frequent grammatical errors. I'm not sure if you fixed the grammatical stuff in your later chapters, but here's a few hints (Constructive criticism, not bashing you for it.)

-Was/Were. Was is singular, Were is plural. I don't really see much "were" in the fic.
-Your/You're, Your is like your book. You're is you are. Many people make that mistake though.
-To/Two/Too. Two = 2, To = to the store, Too = I'm going too (or I'm going also)

Those three key things make reading a lot more clear and easier to understand what you're trying to convey.

Don't sweat it though, I used to do that stuff all the time on Dragon Blast.

But still, MO is very good so far. I look forward to catching up.

I've now read through Chapter 70. I should be done by tomorrow. Still well done.

Yamcha wrote:

Well I power read through and I'm at Chapter 34 now. I will read more tomorrow. I should be caught up in no time.

As for how it is, the story is very well written, it's good in description so it's pretty clear what's going on, the characters are cool (Favorite is Jet and Cloyd so far.)

That said, the only recurring problem that arises is frequent grammatical errors. I'm not sure if you fixed the grammatical stuff in your later chapters, but here's a few hints (Constructive criticism, not bashing you for it.)

-Was/Were. Was is singular, Were is plural. I don't really see much "were" in the fic.
-Your/You're, Your is like your book. You're is you are. Many people make that mistake though.
-To/Two/Too. Two = 2, To = to the store, Too = I'm going too (or I'm going also)

Those three key things make reading a lot more clear and easier to understand what you're trying to convey.

Don't sweat it though, I used to do that stuff all the time on Dragon Blast.

But still, MO is very good so far. I look forward to catching up.

lol, your not the first to mention grammatical errors. Kaio and Buu (I think it was them, can't remember npw) use to bug me a lot on Sly's cause of that. Although at time that time they get on everybody's backs who made errors. That fade had long died though.

Anyway, thanks for the tips.

Yamcha wrote:

I've now read through Chapter 70. I should be done by tomorrow. Still well done.

Damn, your a reading machine

Glad to hear from your comments though that your enjoying it.

justinlynch3 wrote:

Yamcha wrote:

Well I power read through and I'm at Chapter 34 now. I will read more tomorrow. I should be caught up in no time.

As for how it is, the story is very well written, it's good in description so it's pretty clear what's going on, the characters are cool (Favorite is Jet and Cloyd so far.)

That said, the only recurring problem that arises is frequent grammatical errors. I'm not sure if you fixed the grammatical stuff in your later chapters, but here's a few hints (Constructive criticism, not bashing you for it.)

-Was/Were. Was is singular, Were is plural. I don't really see much "were" in the fic.
-Your/You're, Your is like your book. You're is you are. Many people make that mistake though.
-To/Two/Too. Two = 2, To = to the store, Too = I'm going too (or I'm going also)

Those three key things make reading a lot more clear and easier to understand what you're trying to convey.

Don't sweat it though, I used to do that stuff all the time on Dragon Blast.

But still, MO is very good so far. I look forward to catching up.

lol, your not the first to mention grammatical errors. Kaio and Buu (I think it was them, can't remember npw) use to bug me a lot on Sly's cause of that. Although at time that time they get on everybody's backs who made errors. That fade had long died though.

Anyway, thanks for the tips.

Yamcha wrote:

I've now read through Chapter 70. I should be done by tomorrow. Still well done.

Damn, your a reading machine

Glad to hear from your comments though that your enjoying it.

TBH, I don't read very often, but if I do, I read fast and I only read things I'm interested in so that is a very good sign.

Yamcha wrote:

justinlynch3 wrote:

Yamcha wrote:

Well I power read through and I'm at Chapter 34 now. I will read more tomorrow. I should be caught up in no time.

As for how it is, the story is very well written, it's good in description so it's pretty clear what's going on, the characters are cool (Favorite is Jet and Cloyd so far.)

That said, the only recurring problem that arises is frequent grammatical errors. I'm not sure if you fixed the grammatical stuff in your later chapters, but here's a few hints (Constructive criticism, not bashing you for it.)

-Was/Were. Was is singular, Were is plural. I don't really see much "were" in the fic.
-Your/You're, Your is like your book. You're is you are. Many people make that mistake though.
-To/Two/Too. Two = 2, To = to the store, Too = I'm going too (or I'm going also)

Those three key things make reading a lot more clear and easier to understand what you're trying to convey.

Don't sweat it though, I used to do that stuff all the time on Dragon Blast.

But still, MO is very good so far. I look forward to catching up.

lol, your not the first to mention grammatical errors. Kaio and Buu (I think it was them, can't remember npw) use to bug me a lot on Sly's cause of that. Although at time that time they get on everybody's backs who made errors. That fade had long died though.

Anyway, thanks for the tips.

Yamcha wrote:

I've now read through Chapter 70. I should be done by tomorrow. Still well done.

Damn, your a reading machine

Glad to hear from your comments though that your enjoying it.

TBH, I don't read very often, but if I do, I read fast and I only read things I'm interested in so that is a very good sign.

Yes, I suppose it is.