Dragon Soul Discussion

Hmm, so starbuster. I thought that was a nice touch to make it night time and make it seem like mid-day all of the sudden. I know that would freak out anyone near it.

I'm not sure how to feel about the engagement yet. I also wonder where that shark soul will go. And of course, the next type of soul to show up and if the pattern will continue of weakest to strongest showing up.

Overall not bad.

You've seen it action, now all that's left is to find out how it works. As for the engagement, first off Mara has had such a low self esteem that anything less might not have restored her confidence. Second, since when do heroes do something normal and it doesn't go south. The engagement of the two is a necessary part of the overall story.

I do admit, I may have internally facepalmed at "cat got your tongue", but otherwise the end was a good twist. It went without saying that the wedding would be interrupted at some point, but by Kai's hands (or voice) made it good. It's very symbolic of "I can't let you move on to a new life just yet". So she has to deal with this old demon before she can truly move on. So yeah, I like that.