CV Fan Fic Discussion

Question (Don't worry, I will separate this topic and make a discussion topic for you if you wish). Is this the only chapter you have and did you just start this? Just curious.

Ryu wrote:

Question (Don't worry, I will separate this topic and make a discussion topic for you if you wish). Is this the only chapter you have and did you just start this? Just curious.

i came up with the idea a long time ago but i finally started it today, and there is definetly more chapters

Yes, we can always make a discussion topic and split this like Ryu said, but here's a basic tip for fanfic writing.

Spacing paragraphs by two enters is probably best. You should read Fighters Abroad which is set up that way entirely.

Topic split. Now all discussion goes here. Yeah, I write Fighters Abroad and you should probably space it out sort of like that so it's easier to read.

I agree, double spacing between paragraphs helps a lot in fic's.

It's good. I like where you're going with this but I wish it was longer.

And I agree. You should defiantly double space that CVegeta.

Strider Zero wrote:

Yes, we can always make a discussion topic and split this like Ryu said, but here's a basic tip for fanfic writing.

Spacing paragraphs by two enters is probably best. You should read Fighters Abroad which is set up that way entirely.

next time i will double space

Meh, I don't think more than one enter is needed. But hey, that's just me.

Ryu wrote:

Question (Don't worry, I will separate this topic and make a discussion topic for you if you wish). Is this the only chapter you have and did you just start this? Just curious.

by the way i like the way you did this having it a discussion so when i post more episodes people can post here instead of on the episode thanks

That's how we do it around here. It makes the fic tons easier to read so they're all in a row.

So does this fic have an official name? Because if you plan on occasionally making episodes, I will gladly make you a sub-section for your fic like everyone else with a semi-big or higher fic has.

Strider Zero wrote:

So does this fic have an official name? Because if you plan on occasionally making episodes, I will gladly make you a sub-section for your fic like everyone else with a semi-big or higher fic has.

yes its called dragon ball KT

carnagevegeta wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

So does this fic have an official name? Because if you plan on occasionally making episodes, I will gladly make you a sub-section for your fic like everyone else with a semi-big or higher fic has.

yes its called dragon ball KT

Alright cool. I made you a sub-section and made your actual fic a sticky topic that way it's separate from this topic.

Strider Zero wrote:

carnagevegeta wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

So does this fic have an official name? Because if you plan on occasionally making episodes, I will gladly make you a sub-section for your fic like everyone else with a semi-big or higher fic has.

yes its called dragon ball KT

Alright cool. I made you a sub-section and made your actual fic a sticky topic that way it's separate from this topic.

thxs

Did you make that intro yourself? If so, very creative.

Fuck yes, Skillet + DBZ FTW!!

Good job man.

Strider Zero wrote:

Did you make that intro yourself? If so, very creative.

no i didnt make the vid

Cool intro. Good stuff.

Frieza: I swear you would be dead if I had nothing to do.

Zarbon: What do you have to do sir.

Frieza: NONE OF YOUR FUCKING BUISNESS ZARBON.

I lol'd. Anyway, Good episode. I look forward to seeing more Raditz and Bardock and possibly Turles.

Strider Zero wrote:

Frieza: I swear you would be dead if I had nothing to do.

Zarbon: What do you have to do sir.

Frieza: NONE OF YOUR FUCKING BUISNESS ZARBON.

I lol'd. Anyway, Good episode. I look forward to seeing more Raditz and Bardock and possibly Turles.

thxs

A few things.

The pace of the story... it feels a bit rushed to be honest. Dunno if you can put a little more detail to it.

I guess it's fine your way, just as a simply fyi though the common method for thoughts are using ital. If you prefer brackets, that's alright, ital just looks better that's all.

And throwing away the name Kakkorot didn't make any sense. Kakkorot is Goku's real name, saiyan name. Goku could of simply told Raditz he preferred the name Goku...

justinlynch3 wrote:

A few things.

The pace of the story... it feels a bit rushed to be honest. Dunno if you can put a little more detail to it.

I guess it's fine your way, just as a simply fyi though the common method for thoughts are using ital. If you prefer brackets, that's alright, ital just looks better that's all.

And throwing away the name Kakkorot didn't make any sense. Kakkorot is Goku's real name, saiyan name. Goku could of simply told Raditz he preferred the name Goku...

i didnt feel like going through that thats why i named him that from birth

also i didnt feel like i rushed it i thought it was a long episode with good detail but everybody is entitled to their own opinons thanks though

carnagevegeta wrote:

justinlynch3 wrote:

A few things.

The pace of the story... it feels a bit rushed to be honest. Dunno if you can put a little more detail to it.

I guess it's fine your way, just as a simply fyi though the common method for thoughts are using ital. If you prefer brackets, that's alright, ital just looks better that's all.

And throwing away the name Kakkorot didn't make any sense. Kakkorot is Goku's real name, saiyan name. Goku could of simply told Raditz he preferred the name Goku...

i didnt feel like going through that thats why i named him that from birth

also i didnt feel like i rushed it i thought it was a long episode with good detail but everybody is entitled to their own opinons thanks though

No prob.

But yea, I myself found the pace fast, I thought the thing with Bardock was going to take a couple of chapters at least.

It was overall pretty good CVegeta. But I agree with Justin, it seems like your moving fast and the whole Bardock thing I thought was gonna be more than one chapter. Never the less though, I enjoyed it. Your Frieza is funny as balls.

ArmorZeroX wrote:

It was overall pretty good CVegeta. But I agree with Justin, it seems like your moving fast and the whole Bardock thing I thought was gonna be more than one chapter. Never the less though, I enjoyed it. Your Frieza is funny as balls.

there will be alot of things you guys wont expect there is alot of surprises in this