CV Fan Fic Discussion

carnagevegeta wrote:

ArmorZeroX wrote:

It was overall pretty good CVegeta. But I agree with Justin, it seems like your moving fast and the whole Bardock thing I thought was gonna be more than one chapter. Never the less though, I enjoyed it. Your Frieza is funny as balls.

there will be alot of things you guys wont expect there is alot of surprises in this

Looking forward to it. Do you have an idea how many chapters it will be? Just a guess?

ArmorZeroX wrote:

carnagevegeta wrote:

ArmorZeroX wrote:

It was overall pretty good CVegeta. But I agree with Justin, it seems like your moving fast and the whole Bardock thing I thought was gonna be more than one chapter. Never the less though, I enjoyed it. Your Frieza is funny as balls.

there will be alot of things you guys wont expect there is alot of surprises in this

Looking forward to it. Do you have an idea how many chapters it will be? Just a guess?

no but i broke it down into a seasons like a tv show this is season 1 and there will be 5 seasons

Alright. Awesome.

I support a fast pace fanfic as long as it's still good. One thing I recommend is that you save your episodes on notepad files or whatever. Just in case this forum goes down (God forbid), you could lose your fanfic.

That happened to Zero with Dragon Blast where he lost like 50 episodes or something when DBD went down and then he got it back luckily.

Another thing I recommend is that you use Microsoft word or whatever program you have to spell check and grammar check your fic to make it a more upper scale grammar fic. Of course, I'm not insulting you, as everyone makes grammar mistakes every now and then.

Overall, though, good work on the story and such. You barely see Bardock and Raditz so it will be intriguing to read about them more.

Oh yes. I almost forgot about that. Atlantis is a great program to use if you want to use that.

Ryu wrote:

I support a fast pace fanfic as long as it's still good. One thing I recommend is that you save your episodes on notepad files or whatever. Just in case this forum goes down (God forbid), you could lose your fanfic.

That happened to Zero with Dragon Blast where he lost like 50 episodes or something when DBD went down and then he got it back luckily.

Another thing I recommend is that you use Microsoft word or whatever program you have to spell check and grammar check your fic to make it a more upper scale grammar fic. Of course, I'm not insulting you, as everyone makes grammar mistakes every now and then.

Overall, though, good work on the story and such. You barely see Bardock and Raditz so it will be intriguing to read about them more.

thxs for info

carnagevegeta wrote:

Ryu wrote:

I support a fast pace fanfic as long as it's still good. One thing I recommend is that you save your episodes on notepad files or whatever. Just in case this forum goes down (God forbid), you could lose your fanfic.

That happened to Zero with Dragon Blast where he lost like 50 episodes or something when DBD went down and then he got it back luckily.

Another thing I recommend is that you use Microsoft word or whatever program you have to spell check and grammar check your fic to make it a more upper scale grammar fic. Of course, I'm not insulting you, as everyone makes grammar mistakes every now and then.

Overall, though, good work on the story and such. You barely see Bardock and Raditz so it will be intriguing to read about them more.

thxs for info

No problem. It's what I do.

Interesting. So right off the bat, Zarbon is gone. One thing though...

Then Zarbon gets hit with a series of purple small ki blast. Which sends Turles to the ground.

What?

lol yep gonna have to change that

Yeah, and what Ryu said about the spell check and grammar check thing. I have a program called Atlantis that does this if you want it. When you post normally, that stuff is alright, but you'll want to make your fanfic look nicer with it.

Of course, that's just constructive criticism.

I agree. It never hurts to have upper scale grammar in a fiction.

Strider Zero wrote:

Interesting. So right off the bat, Zarbon is gone. One thing though...

Then Zarbon gets hit with a series of purple small ki blast. Which sends Turles to the ground.

What?

you thought zarbon would last longer?

carnagevegeta wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

Interesting. So right off the bat, Zarbon is gone. One thing though...

Then Zarbon gets hit with a series of purple small ki blast. Which sends Turles to the ground.

What?

you thought zarbon would last longer?

I did. You kind of introduced him and whacked him off. But besides that, it was still enjoyable.

Initially in Z, Zarbon>Vegeta until Namek. I also thought he would last longer but that's alright.

I to thought Zarbon would of lasted longer.

Well there goes the rest of Frieza's henchmen

No one lives after one battle, do they? Anyway, still good.

ArmorZeroX wrote:

No one lives after one battle, do they? Anyway, still good.

lol raditz lived after his fight with goku though

carnagevegeta wrote:

ArmorZeroX wrote:

No one lives after one battle, do they? Anyway, still good.

lol raditz leved after his fight with goku though

I guess Raditz is an exception...for right now.

Maybe the Ginyu Force will put up a better fight.

Ryu, wanna make a bet if they'll die in the chapter they first appear in?

Of course. Vegeta takes Jeice, Bardock/Turles takes Burter, Goku takes Recoome and Raditz takes Guldo.

CVegeta's gotta have the best line in there.

Jeice: We are the Ginyu... *gets punched in the face*

Now, now, guys. That's not a fair assessment. Just because Zarbon, Cui and Dodoria all died right away doesn't mean they will.

Eh, Goku takes em all in one Ki blast.

Strider Zero wrote:

Now, now, guys. That's not a fair assessment. Just because Zarbon, Cui and Dodoria all died right away doesn't mean they will.

Eh, Goku takes em all in one Ki blast.

lol