Dragon Soul Discussion

I would love to hear from people so I can improve as a writer.

Good luck, man. I made your fic topic a sticky that way it always stays at the top. Anyway I'll give you a few pieces of friendly advice.

Always write your chapters on a word document or whatever text editing thing you use. If something were to happen on this site, you have your backup. Not to mention spellcheck is there for you just in case.

Make sure you have your visuals well described so people can have a good picture in their head as to what is going on including scenery, character descriptions, etc. You can include reference pictures to illustrate what you mean as well. You can also use music to sway the mood to whatever you want. If you read Fighters Abroad, you'll get a good feel for what I mean.

Anyway, good luck again and I look forward to reading.

Nice opening 2 chapters. Let's see how she plans to escape.

This section is also for comment about how you think about the fic. I would appreciate if people would tell me what they think of the fic.

Episode 5's structure was well done. It seems as if your writing is getting better.

Interesting backstory. Although I still think it was Kai's fault .

Strider Zero wrote:

Interesting backstory. Although I still think it was Kai's fault .

It was indirectly her fault. If it was directly her fault, then she would have lit the fire. But I do see what you are saying. The part that you were waiting for will be here soon.

"Is she flying? Yeah, she's flying. How the hell is she flying? Maybe it's me who's drunk."

Favorite chapter so far. Keep it up.

Merry Christmas to all the Mystic forumers out there! Here is my gift to you all, the next chapter of Dragon Soul.

I would like to thank everyone who reads my fic. I am so glad that i have over 1000 views. I am almost done the first arc, and can't wait to hear responses to this arc's ending. The fight with Agent Z has only just begun, and i hope that you will all enjoy the rest of it.

I hope everyone enjoyed the latest chapter of dragon soul. The time for the arc 1 finale is coming. In one week, I will post the next chapter. This gives you one week to catch up before the arc one finale, so catch up while you can.

It's cool to see a fic still going. I haven't been reading this one though. Maybe I'll start.

I'm on Chapter 19. Ramsey is the best character.

Strider Zero wrote:

I'm on Chapter 19. Ramsey is the best character.

I am glad to hear that you like him. I am also glad that your reading again. I hope you will be caught up in time for the release of the final chapter of the arc. Once armorzerox finishes school we will need to get him to get back into reading it as well.

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

I'm on Chapter 19. Ramsey is the best character.

I am glad to hear that you like him. I am also glad that your reading again. I hope you will be caught up in time for the release of the final chapter of the arc. Once armorzerox finishes school we will need to get him to get back into reading it as well.

I caught up just now XD. It's good so far. The one thing I didn't like was the one-shot on Agent X. Otherwise, you're doing a good job. Keep it up.

Strider Zero wrote:

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

I'm on Chapter 19. Ramsey is the best character.

I am glad to hear that you like him. I am also glad that your reading again. I hope you will be caught up in time for the release of the final chapter of the arc. Once armorzerox finishes school we will need to get him to get back into reading it as well.

I caught up just now XD. It's good so far. The one thing I didn't like was the one-shot on Agent X. Otherwise, you're doing a good job. Keep it up.

You must realize that the higher up you get in skill and power the quicker a battle can end. It was intended to show that Mara was faster and stronger by a lot, but his mind's eye was the only thing to keep him in the battle. Also did you notice any of the references that I put in?

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

I'm on Chapter 19. Ramsey is the best character.

I am glad to hear that you like him. I am also glad that your reading again. I hope you will be caught up in time for the release of the final chapter of the arc. Once armorzerox finishes school we will need to get him to get back into reading it as well.

I caught up just now XD. It's good so far. The one thing I didn't like was the one-shot on Agent X. Otherwise, you're doing a good job. Keep it up.

You must realize that the higher up you get in skill and power the quicker a battle can end. It was intended to show that Mara was faster and stronger by a lot, but his mind's eye was the only thing to keep him in the battle. Also did you notice any of the references that I put in?

The problem was that she was previously injured and fatigued and Agent X had thoroughly beaten her and then he lost in one hit.

Of course I noticed most of the references. The Men in Black one was probably the most clever.

Strider Zero wrote:

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

I'm on Chapter 19. Ramsey is the best character.

I am glad to hear that you like him. I am also glad that your reading again. I hope you will be caught up in time for the release of the final chapter of the arc. Once armorzerox finishes school we will need to get him to get back into reading it as well.

I caught up just now XD. It's good so far. The one thing I didn't like was the one-shot on Agent X. Otherwise, you're doing a good job. Keep it up.

You must realize that the higher up you get in skill and power the quicker a battle can end. It was intended to show that Mara was faster and stronger by a lot, but his mind's eye was the only thing to keep him in the battle. Also did you notice any of the references that I put in?

The problem was that she was previously injured and fatigued and Agent X had thoroughly beaten her and then he lost in one hit.

Of course I noticed most of the references. The Men in Black one was probably the most clever.

There are many cases of the hero getting beat up by the enemy and then ending it in one strike. Ex: zoro vs kakku, luffy vs luici, goku vs freiza, and gohn vs cell. Also did you click on all the picture and video links while you were reading?

Strider Zero wrote:

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

I'm on Chapter 19. Ramsey is the best character.

I am glad to hear that you like him. I am also glad that your reading again. I hope you will be caught up in time for the release of the final chapter of the arc. Once armorzerox finishes school we will need to get him to get back into reading it as well.

I caught up just now XD. It's good so far. The one thing I didn't like was the one-shot on Agent X. Otherwise, you're doing a good job. Keep it up.

You must realize that the higher up you get in skill and power the quicker a battle can end. It was intended to show that Mara was faster and stronger by a lot, but his mind's eye was the only thing to keep him in the battle. Also did you notice any of the references that I put in?

The problem was that she was previously injured and fatigued and Agent X had thoroughly beaten her and then he lost in one hit.

Of course I noticed most of the references. The Men in Black one was probably the most clever.

There are many cases of the hero getting beat up by the enemy and then ending it in one strike. Ex: zoro vs kakku, luffy vs luici, goku vs freiza, and gohn vs cell. Also did you click on all the picture and video links while you were reading?

Spoiler:

The battle between them was to be a draw. Agent X's lost was more because he wasn't prepared for her attack.

I just posted the arc 1 finale of Dragon Soul I hope everyone enjoys it. I would like to hear peoples thoughts on this recent chapter and the arc as a whole.

Interesting end to the arc. Good chapter. The twist concerning her friends is interesting. I expected it to go two ways with the friends.

Spoiler:

Nice intro arc. Keep it up.

Strider Zero wrote:

Interesting end to the arc. Good chapter. The twist concerning her friends is interesting. I expected it to go two ways with the friends.

Spoiler:

Nice intro arc. Keep it up.

Thanks a lot, and i can't wait for you to see arc 2.

donitaly92 wrote:

Strider Zero wrote:

Interesting end to the arc. Good chapter. The twist concerning her friends is interesting. I expected it to go two ways with the friends.

Spoiler:

Nice intro arc. Keep it up.

Thanks a lot, and i can't wait for you to see arc 2.

I'll look forward to it. Now go read Detective Shin